Tuesday, 21 September 2021

My story! / lock-down #day???

 Kia ora!

Yay! We are going to be in level 3!

here is my story that i made! 

hope you like it!


Bye!


2 comments:

  1. What will you tell mum in the morning??
    Wow, great story Coco. You have some fantastic language choices, I particularly like: "it gave me shivers", "tiptoed" and "so creepy". I'm not sure I would have been brave enough to sneak over to the creepy house!
    You can be proud of your work - tino pai Coco!

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  2. Kia Ora Coco. Wow your story is great! Using Book Creator has definitely added impact and made it look like a real book. You have made some great word choices. Have you ever been scared like the characters in your book?

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