What will you tell mum in the morning?? Wow, great story Coco. You have some fantastic language choices, I particularly like: "it gave me shivers", "tiptoed" and "so creepy". I'm not sure I would have been brave enough to sneak over to the creepy house! You can be proud of your work - tino pai Coco!
Kia Ora Coco. Wow your story is great! Using Book Creator has definitely added impact and made it look like a real book. You have made some great word choices. Have you ever been scared like the characters in your book?
What will you tell mum in the morning??
ReplyDeleteWow, great story Coco. You have some fantastic language choices, I particularly like: "it gave me shivers", "tiptoed" and "so creepy". I'm not sure I would have been brave enough to sneak over to the creepy house!
You can be proud of your work - tino pai Coco!
Kia Ora Coco. Wow your story is great! Using Book Creator has definitely added impact and made it look like a real book. You have made some great word choices. Have you ever been scared like the characters in your book?
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