Monday, 30 August 2021

Volcano writing! / lock-down! day 12!

 This is my writing we had to change one and make one!

here it is I hope you like it!


What do you think? 
Bye!

2 comments:

  1. I love your improved sentences, Coco, especially "dirty wet ground", great image. I really liked ""licked across the sky" in your description, an awesome picture.

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  2. Kia ora Coco, thank you for sharing your mahi (work) with us. I can see you have thought carefully about which words to use in your writing. I agree, it would be a very alarming sight if you were near a volcano when it erupted. Keep up the great effort Coco!

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